Very good.
The time travel one makes me think though.
"Since Mallett's father died young of a heart attack, Ronald resolved to discover time travel in order to save the life of his departed dad."
Well, obviously that hasn't worked then, because if he did discover time travel then he'd save his Dad and therefore not spend his life trying to invent time travel to save his Dad, hence his Dad would depart this mortal coil and he'd spend his life trying to invent time travel to save his Dad which obviously wouldn't work, because if he did discover time travel then he'd save his Dad and therefore not spend his life trying to invent time travel to save his Dad, hence his Dad would depart this mortal coil and he'd spend his life trying to invent time travel to save his Dad etc. I think.
Unless he spawned some kind of alternate timeline when he went back in time (á la BTTF2) in which case this version of him will never know if he successfully succeeded with his time travel shenanigans in the first place. Mind you, who's to say he hasn't already succeeded.
